In just the past two days I have come across two articles, both of which “how-to’s” about good writing, both of which were rife with writing errors. What errors? Passive voice, pseudo-academic style (in other words, difficult to understand), agreement of pronouns and antecedent (That person caught their coat in the door), crazy sentence construction, and frankly — text that sounds like it was written by an ESOL (English as a second language) writer. Take a look for yourself (be sure to come back, I’ve got lots more to say.)
English maven that I am, I left a comment on the site basically saying what I am saying to you. But I want to say MORE to you, because the great highway in the virtual-sky is becoming clogged with crap that multiplies explosively moment by moment. Let me tell you why.
The marketplace is turning inside out, upside down as brick and mortar gives way to the virtual shingle (website, blog, SNS, etc.) I’ll spare you the technical mumbo-jumbo, but to make an Internet presence means to generate content, content content. Translated: articles, essays, blog entries, reviews, how-to’s,m features, interviews. When businesses take the approach of wanting to throw up a bunch of content to get ratings, traffic, etc., they don’t care about quality. They do care about keywords, key phrases, and Search Engine crawlers. What you get on these sites is often times, crap. And, you get crap written by offshore workers whose main language is NOT English, but they are cheap, cheap, cheap.
My purpose here is threefold:
Thank you so much for mentioning my site. I especially appreciate how much time you have spent, including dedicating a post just for us. It really must bother you quite a lot, either that you really are desperate for traffic/readers. Either way, I appreciate all the attention you have given to us.
Cheers!!!
Comment by John Traveler — July 5, 2009 @ 10:03 pm
John,
Thanks for the response. But I have to tell you, I “calls ‘em as I sees ‘em!” Just brush up on your writing skills in this day of “digital rhetoric” where good writing is so important.
And no, I truly am truly not in it for traffic, rather: for results. This Internet creature belongs to us all and thus, we must all contribute to improve its quality.
Comment by Mary Anne — July 9, 2009 @ 4:48 pm